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81 changes: 81 additions & 0 deletions docs/review-results.md
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# Code Review Results

This document contains the results of the code review.

## General Findings

* [Add general findings here]

### `pvq-executor`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.

### `pvq-extension-swap`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.

### `pvq-extension`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.

### `pvq-primitives`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.
- **Undocumented Enum**: The `PvqError` enum variants should be documented.

### `pvq-program-metadata-gen`

- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.
- **Use of `expect()`**: The binary uses `expect()` which can cause panics. It should be replaced with proper error handling.
- **Long `main` function**: The `main` function in `src/bin/pvq-program-metadata-gen.rs` should be broken down into smaller, more manageable functions.

### `pvq-program`

- **No README.md**: The crate and its procedural macro sub-crate should have `README.md` files.
- **No Tests**: The crate and its procedural macro sub-crate are missing tests. UI tests for the procedural macro are particularly important.

### `pvq-runtime-api`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.
- **Inefficient Data Types**: The API uses `Vec<u8>` for parameters and return types where slices (`&[u8]`) could be more efficient.

### `pvq-test-runner`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The test runner itself is not tested.
- **Use of `expect()`/`unwrap()`**: The crate uses `expect()` and `unwrap()` extensively, which can lead to panics.
- **Long `main` function**: The `main` function in the binary is too long and should be refactored.
- **Hardcoded test data**: The test data and expected results are hardcoded within the runner. It would be more flexible to load them from external files (e.g., JSON or YAML).

### `poc/runtime`

- **No README.md**: The runtime crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The runtime and its extension implementations are not tested.
- **Hardcoded Gas Limit**: The default gas limit in the `execute_query` runtime API is hardcoded. It should be a constant.

### `guest-examples`

- **No README.md**: The `guest-examples` directory should have a `README.md` explaining each example.
- **Magic Numbers**: The examples use hardcoded `extension_id`s. These should be replaced with named constants.
- **Lack of Comments**: The examples could benefit from more comments explaining the code.
- **Misleading Calculation**: The `sum_balance_percent` example has a potentially misleading percentage calculation that should be clarified. Unit tests should be added for the executor logic and error handling.
- **`unwrap()` in `PvqExecutor::new`**: The `unwrap()` call should be replaced with proper error handling.
- **Long `execute` function**: The `execute` function in `executor.rs` should be broken down into smaller, more manageable functions.
- **Tuple as return type**: The return type of the `execute` function should be a struct for better readability.
- **Lack of comments**: More comments could be added to `executor.rs` to explain the execution flow.

### `pvq-extension-core`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.
- **Commented-out functions**: The `lib.rs` file contains commented-out functions that should be implemented or removed.

### `pvq-extension-fungibles`

- **No README.md**: The crate should have a `README.md` explaining its purpose and how to use it.
- **No Tests**: The crate is missing tests.
4 changes: 4 additions & 0 deletions guest-examples/sum-balance-percent/src/main.rs
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#![no_std]
#![no_main]

// REVIEW: The `extension_id` is a magic number. It would be better to define it as a constant with a descriptive name.
#[pvq_program::program]
mod sum_balance_percent {
type AssetId = u32;
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#[program::entrypoint]
fn sum_balance(asset: AssetId, accounts: alloc::vec::Vec<AccountId>) -> Balance {
// REVIEW: The entrypoint should be renamed to `sum_balance_percent` to reflect that it returns a percentage.
// Also, the percentage calculation `sum_balance * 100 / total_supply(asset)` can be misleading.
// It should be clarified that this is an integer division and might not be precise.
let mut sum_balance = 0;
for account in accounts {
sum_balance += balance(asset, account);
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#![no_std]
#![no_main]

// REVIEW: The `extension_id` is a magic number. It would be better to define it as a constant with a descriptive name.
#[pvq_program::program]
mod sum_balance {

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#![no_std]
#![no_main]

// REVIEW: The `extension_id` used in the `extension_fn` attributes is a magic number. It would be better to define it as a constant with a descriptive name.
#[pvq_program::program]
mod swap_info {

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#![no_std]
#![no_main]

// REVIEW: The `extension_id` is a magic number. It would be better to define it as a constant with a descriptive name.
#[pvq_program::program]
mod query_total_supply {
#[program::extension_fn(extension_id = 4071833530116166512u64, fn_index = 0)]
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// REVIEW: The runtime lacks tests. While it's a proof-of-concept, adding some basic tests for the custom logic (like the PVQ execution) would be beneficial.
// REVIEW: A `README.md` file in the `poc/runtime` directory would be helpful to explain its purpose, how to build it, and how to run it with a node.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]
// Frame macros reference features which this crate does not have
#![allow(unexpected_cfgs)]
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}

impl pvq_runtime_api::PvqApi<Block> for Runtime {
// REVIEW: The default gas limit is hardcoded here. It would be better to define this as a
// constant, e.g., `const DEFAULT_GAS_LIMIT: i64 = ONE_SECOND_IN_GAS * 2;` and then use
// that constant here. This will improve readability and maintainability.
fn execute_query(program: Vec<u8>, args: Vec<u8>, gas_limit: Option<i64>) -> pvq_primitives::PvqResult {
// Set a default gas limit of 2 seconds
pvq::execute_query(&program, &args, gas_limit.unwrap_or(ONE_SECOND_IN_GAS * 2))
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1 change: 1 addition & 0 deletions poc/runtime/src/pvq.rs
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#[allow(unused_imports)]
use frame::deps::scale_info::prelude::{format, string::String};

// REVIEW: The extension implementations in this file are not tested. Unit tests should be added to ensure they behave as expected.
use pvq_extension::metadata::Metadata;
use pvq_extension::{extensions_impl, ExtensionsExecutor, InvokeSource};

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}

impl<Ctx: PvqExecutorContext> PvqExecutor<Ctx> {
// REVIEW: The use of `.unwrap()` when creating a new `Engine` can cause a panic.
// This should be replaced with proper error handling, for instance, by returning a `Result`.
pub fn new(config: Config, mut context: Ctx) -> Self {
let engine = Engine::new(&config).unwrap();
let mut linker = Linker::<Ctx::UserData, Ctx::UserError>::new();
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}
}

// REVIEW: The `execute` function is overly long and complex. It should be broken down into smaller,
// more focused functions to improve readability and maintainability.
// REVIEW: The `execute` function returns a tuple `(PvqExecutorResult<Ctx::UserError>, GasLimit)`.
// This should be encapsulated in a dedicated struct for better clarity.
pub fn execute(
&mut self,
program: &[u8],
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]

extern crate alloc;
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]

use pvq_extension::extension_decl;
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pub trait ExtensionCore {
type ExtensionId;
fn has_extension(id: Self::ExtensionId) -> bool;

// REVIEW: The following crypto and storage functions are commented out.
// They should be implemented or removed.
// crypto functions
// fn blake2_64(data: Vec<u8>) -> [u8; 8];
// fn blake2_128(data: Vec<u8>) -> [u8; 16];
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]
use pvq_extension::extension_decl;

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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]
extern crate alloc;

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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: While there are documentation comments, a `README.md` file would be beneficial for new contributors to understand the crate's purpose and usage.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]
//! # PVQ Extension System
//!
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
// REVIEW: The variants of the `PvqError` enum should be documented to explain their meaning.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]

extern crate alloc;
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6 changes: 6 additions & 0 deletions pvq-program-metadata-gen/src/bin/pvq-program-metadata-gen.rs
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Expand Up @@ -15,6 +15,8 @@ struct Args {
output_dir: PathBuf,
}

// REVIEW: The `main` function is overly long and complex. It should be broken down into smaller,
// more focused functions to improve readability and maintainability.
fn main() {
// Initialize tracing
tracing_subscriber::fmt::init();
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}
info!("Metadata generation successful!");
}

// REVIEW: The `main` function uses `expect()` in multiple places, which can cause the
// program to panic. Consider returning a `Result` from `main` and using the `?` operator to
// propagate errors. This will make the error handling more robust.
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
pub type ExtensionId = u64;
pub type FnIndex = u8;
mod features;
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/// }
/// ```
///
// REVIEW: The procedural macro lacks tests. UI tests should be added to ensure the macro generates correct code and provides good error messages for invalid input.
// REVIEW: A `README.md` file in the `procedural` crate's directory would be beneficial to explain its usage and how it works.
mod program;
use proc_macro::TokenStream;

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def.item.into_token_stream()
}

// REVIEW: The `expand_extension_fn` and `expand_main` functions use `expect()` and
// `unreachable!()` in several places. While some of these might be safe due to checks in the
// parsing stage, it's generally better to return a `compile_error!` with a descriptive
// message. This will provide better error messages to the user of the macro.
fn expand_extension_fn(extension_fn: &mut ExtensionFn, parity_scale_codec: &syn::Path) -> TokenStream2 {
let extension_id = extension_fn.extension_id;
let fn_index = extension_fn.fn_index;
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]
pub use pvq_program_procedural::program;
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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing, which is critical for ensuring its correctness and stability.
// Unit tests should be added.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage.
// A `README.md` file should be created.
#![cfg_attr(not(feature = "std"), no_std)]

extern crate alloc;
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// - `gas_limit`: Optional gas limit for query execution. When set to `None`, execution is constrained by the default time boundary.
decl_runtime_apis! {
pub trait PvqApi {
// REVIEW: The `program` and `args` parameters are passed as `Vec<u8>`, which implies ownership.
// Consider using `&[u8]` to avoid unnecessary allocations when passing data to the runtime API.
fn execute_query(program: Vec<u8>, args: Vec<u8>, gas_limit: Option<i64>) -> PvqResult;
// REVIEW: The `metadata` function returns a `Vec<u8>`. If the metadata is static,
// consider returning a `&'static [u8]` to avoid allocations.
fn metadata() -> Vec<u8>;
}
}
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}
}

// REVIEW: The `main` function is doing too much. It should be broken down into smaller functions for better readability and maintainability (e.g., a function for initializing tracing, a function for parsing args, a function for running the test).
// REVIEW: The `main` function uses `expect()` and `unwrap()` which can cause the program to panic. It should be updated to return a `Result` and propagate errors gracefully.
fn main() {
let registry = tracing_subscriber::registry();

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// REVIEW: The crate lacks any form of testing for its own logic. While it is a test runner, adding unit tests for functions like `prepare_input_data` and `expected_result` would improve its reliability.
// REVIEW: There is no `README.md` file in the crate, making it difficult for new contributors to understand its purpose and usage. A `README.md` file should be created.
use parity_scale_codec::Encode;
use pvq_extension::{extensions_impl, ExtensionsExecutor, InvokeSource};
use sp_core::crypto::{AccountId32, Ss58Codec};
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}
}

// REVIEW: The `prepare_input_data` and `get_liquidity_pool` functions use `expect()` which
// can cause the program to panic. Consider returning a `Result` and using the `?`
// operator to propagate errors. This will make the error handling more robust.
pub fn prepare_input_data(program_path: &str, chain: &str) -> Vec<u8> {
let mut input_data = Vec::new();

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