tweaks

Author: riccardobl

src/components/x-roadmap.html

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ <h2>Second Phase</h2>
     <!-- <i>2025/10/10</i> -->
 
     <p>
-        The second phases of development begins
+        The second phase of development begins
     </p>
     <x-separator></x-separator>
 

src/components/x-roadmap1.html

@@ -5,28 +5,27 @@
             The project starts as a series of modules for the battle-tested <a target="_blank"
                 href="https://jmonkeyengine.org">jMonkeyEngine</a>.
             <br>
-            A JVM-based high performance, royalty-free, open-source modular game engine.
+            A JVM-based high-performance, royalty-free, open-source modular game engine.
         </x-milestone>
 
         <x-task t="tick"
             fact="<a target='_blank' href='https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/nostr4j'>nostr4j</a> standalone library">
-            a high-performance nostr client designed for real-time application is developed and
-            integrated into the engine
+            A high-performance Nostr client designed for real-time applications is developed and
+            integrated into the engine.
         </x-task>
 
         <x-task t="tick" fact="<a target='_blank' href='https://ngengine.org/docs/auth/'>nge-auth</a> engine module">
-            player authentication via nostr local and remote signers
+            Player authentication via Nostr local and remote signers.
         </x-task>
 
-
         <x-task t="tick"
             fact="<a target='_blank' href='https://ngengine.org/docs/network/'>nge-networking</a> engine module">
-            the network stack module is replaced with high-throughput, serverless, encrypted P2P using
-            <b>RTC over Nostr signaling</b>, enabling easy development of decentralized games and apps
+            The network stack module is replaced with high-throughput, serverless, encrypted P2P using
+            <b>RTC over Nostr signaling</b>, enabling easy development of decentralized games and apps.
         </x-task>
 
         <x-task t="tick" fact="<a target='_blank' href='https://ngengine.org/docs/gui/'>nge-ui</a> engine module">
-            Simple GUI module for 2D users interfaces and HUDs
+            Simple GUI module for 2D user interfaces and HUDs.
         </x-task>
 
         <x-milestone t="tick" link="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/ngengine/releases/tag/0.0" title="v0.0.x NGE"
@@ -50,38 +49,37 @@
                 <li>MacOS</li>
             </ul>
             <p>
-                using jvm based languages.
+                Using JVM-based languages.
             </p>
             <p>
-                This release is accompanied by a tech demo showcasing the engine P2P networking capabilities,
+                This release is accompanied by a tech demo showcasing the engine’s P2P networking capabilities,
                 which can be found at <a
                     href="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/sea-of-nostriches-demo/releases/tag/1.0.0">github.com/NostrGameEngine/sea-of-nostriches-demo</a>
             </p>
         </x-milestone>
 
         <x-task t="tick" fact='<a target="_blank"
                         href="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/nostrads">nostrads</a> standalone library'>
-            a privacy-preserving adsframework is built on top of nostr
+            A privacy-preserving ads framework is built on top of Nostr.
         </x-task>
 
         <x-task t="tick" fact='<a target="_blank"
                         href="https://ngengine.org/docs/ads/">nge-ads</a> engine module'>
-            the ad framework is integrated into the engine for in-game, immersive advertising
+            The ad framework is integrated into the engine for in-game, immersive advertising.
         </x-task>
 
         <x-task t="tick">
-            context-aware advertising support is achieved by enabling developers to create metadata areas
-            within the virtual world of their games
+            Context-aware advertising support is achieved by enabling developers to create metadata areas
+            within the virtual world of their games.
         </x-task>
 
-
         <x-milestone t="tick" link="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/ngengine/releases/tag/0.1.1"
             title="v0.1.x In-Game Ads" img="imgs/nge-v01.gif">
             <p>
                 This release brings many bug fixes and improvements, but the main feature is in-game advertising
                 powered by the
                 <a href="https://nostr-ads.ngengine.org/" target="_blank">nostrads protocol</a>, designed to bring ads
-                to nostr in a privacy-friendly and permissionless
+                to Nostr in a privacy-friendly and permissionless
                 way.
             </p>
             <p>
@@ -93,15 +91,15 @@
 
         <x-task t="tick" fact='<a href="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/ngengine/tree/master/nge-android"
                             target="_blank">nge-android</a> engine module'>
-            android support
+            Android support.
         </x-task>
         <x-task t="tick" fact='<a href="https://github.com/NostrGameEngine/ngengine/tree/master/nge-web"
                                         target="_blank">nge-web</a> engine module'>
-            webgl2 based renderer and browser support
+            WebGL2-based renderer and browser support.
         </x-task>
-        <x-milestone   title="v0.2.x" img="imgs/web.webp">
+        <x-milestone title="v0.2.x" img="imgs/web.webp">
             <p>
-                At this stage the engine has been fully ported to TeaVM and Android.
+                At this stage, the engine has been fully ported to TeaVM and Android.
                 <br>
                 Games and apps built with Nostr Game Engine can now be deployed to:
             <ul>
@@ -115,9 +113,7 @@
             support the new build targets.
             All the previous demos are ported over to the new template and built for the web platform.
             </p>
-
         </x-milestone>
 
-
     </div>
 </section>

src/components/x-roadmap2.html

@@ -2,30 +2,29 @@
     <div class="timeline">
 
         <x-task t="tick">
-            gamer profile over nostr
+            Gamer profile over Nostr
         </x-task>
 
-        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/58.md">nip-58</a>'>
-            achievements over nostr
+        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/58.md">NIP-58</a>'>
+            Achievements over Nostr
         </x-task>
 
         <x-task t="tick">
-            match-making over nostr
+            Matchmaking over Nostr
         </x-task>
 
-        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/17.md">nip-17</a>'>
-            player to player text-chat over nostr
+        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/17.md">NIP-17</a>'>
+            Player‑to‑player text chat over Nostr
         </x-task>
-        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/28.md">nip-28</a>'>
-            proximity and area text-chat over nostr
+        <x-task fact='<a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/nostr-protocol/nips/blob/master/28.md">NIP-28</a>'>
+            Proximity and area text chat over Nostr
         </x-task>
-        <x-task >
-            Improve component system with spatial-based components
+        <x-task>
+            Improve component system with spatial components
         </x-task>
-        <x-milestone title="v0.3.x SOCIAL"  img="imgs/social.webp">
+        <x-milestone title="v0.3.x Social" img="imgs/social.webp">
             <p>
-                At this stage the engine provides modules with the tools and abstractions to implement
-                social features in games.
+                The engine provides modules and abstractions to implement social features in games.
             </p>
         </x-milestone>