updated about me page - fixed grammar

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 Something that I started about a year and a half ago is tutoring and mentoring at Lauren’s House. Before joining Lauren’s House, I knew the value of community, but it wasn’t until I joined it that it became a personalized experience for me. Joining Lauren’s House, I saw genuineness, I saw compassion, I saw inclusion, I saw ingenuity, I saw inspiration—and I saw change. It’s one thing to be able to contribute to a mission, but it’s another thing to see the direct change. At Lauren’s House, I see the youth there forming into fine individuals, and having the honor to actively contribute to that holds a special place in my heart.
 
-I feel like it's general consensus to keep these "about me" pages short—or at least shorter than what I've already written—so I would probably say the last thing you should know about me is my love for Pickleball and its positive impacts. I've seen how it has transformed the local community in Palo Alto—to the point where the courts stay packed well into the night. It made me think: what better way than to bring that sense of community to my high school to help solve the mental health crisis? That was just over one and a half years ago, and how we have a vibrant Pickleball Community here at Gunn High School. It's amazing to see how far starting Gunn High Pickleball Club has come, and I can't wait to see what the future holds.
+I feel like it's general consensus to keep these "about me" pages short—or at least shorter than what I've already written—so I would probably say the last thing you should know about me is my love for pickleball and its positive impacts. I've seen how it has transformed the local community in Palo Alto—to the point where the courts stay packed well into the night. It made me think: what better way than to bring that sense of community to my high school to help solve the mental health crisis? That was just over one and a half years ago, and how we have a vibrant pickleball community here at Gunn High School. It's amazing to see how far starting Gunn High Pickleball Club has come, and I can't wait to see what the future holds.
 

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`17`	`17`	Something that I started about a year and a half ago is tutoring and mentoring at Lauren’s House. Before joining Lauren’s House, I knew the value of community, but it wasn’t until I joined it that it became a personalized experience for me. Joining Lauren’s House, I saw genuineness, I saw compassion, I saw inclusion, I saw ingenuity, I saw inspiration—and I saw change. It’s one thing to be able to contribute to a mission, but it’s another thing to see the direct change. At Lauren’s House, I see the youth there forming into fine individuals, and having the honor to actively contribute to that holds a special place in my heart.
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`19`		-I feel like it's general consensus to keep these "about me" pages short—or at least shorter than what I've already written—so I would probably say the last thing you should know about me is my love for Pickleball and its positive impacts. I've seen how it has transformed the local community in Palo Alto—to the point where the courts stay packed well into the night. It made me think: what better way than to bring that sense of community to my high school to help solve the mental health crisis? That was just over one and a half years ago, and how we have a vibrant Pickleball Community here at Gunn High School. It's amazing to see how far starting Gunn High Pickleball Club has come, and I can't wait to see what the future holds.
	`19`	+I feel like it's general consensus to keep these "about me" pages short—or at least shorter than what I've already written—so I would probably say the last thing you should know about me is my love for pickleball and its positive impacts. I've seen how it has transformed the local community in Palo Alto—to the point where the courts stay packed well into the night. It made me think: what better way than to bring that sense of community to my high school to help solve the mental health crisis? That was just over one and a half years ago, and how we have a vibrant pickleball community here at Gunn High School. It's amazing to see how far starting Gunn High Pickleball Club has come, and I can't wait to see what the future holds.
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